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Postby Guest » Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:15 pm

"well we can improve that you see" Hatter interrupted "Playing nice would put you in a position in which you could position the person you were unfortunately positioned with to recieve a potential remedy for that which caused her to be in a position where she is unable to be herself. In this position she did very unspeakably nasty things that now has you both in the position where you now find yourselves which I'm sure you'd would love to unposition yourselves if not make more bearable. Having these facts it would then make sense that you would also then want to position those who are in a position to help this negative state and restore good health to Big Head in a position which allows them to do so? As for our position in the matter, you have noted my lack of colorage and this we conclude to be of great disvalue to me and my peers so we are positioned in this position, questing to find the position of a treatment which happens to be in the very position, in fact on the person, of your unwilling companion. Therefore, in conclusion, is it not to benifits of both parties that we position our thinking in the same position and work together to position ourselves where we need to be in order to bring our unfortunate positions into a positive state?" Hatter offered before knitting his eyebrows, then nodding after concluding his point had been made, "yes that right"

Stein just stared at him blankly.
Best line ever hahahahaha! :D Keep writing, I love this story!

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Awesome!

Postby Samssmile » Tue Nov 02, 2010 2:54 am

This is an awesome story! please continue! i want to hear the rest of the plot!
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Postby Angel-wings » Mon Dec 13, 2010 2:00 pm

Hi guys sorry for the extremely long delay will be updated soon I promise. In the mean time check out the video of me acting out the Mad Hatter line to see if it worked when I was writing it...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UYZharTydM4

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Postby PrairieStorm » Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:10 am

I'd like to compliment you on your story. Great job,keep up the very good work.

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Postby Angel-wings » Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:11 am

I'd like to compliment you on your story. Great job,keep up the very good work.

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thankyou very much!

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Postby PrairieStorm » Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:15 am

You're quite welcome. :)

Can't you tell that I'm a major Mad Hatter fan?

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Postby Angel-wings » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:36 am

You're quite welcome. :)

Can't you tell that I'm a major Mad Hatter fan?
Yay Mad Hatter! Let us form an association!

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Postby ~MadderforHatter~ » Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:16 am

Hope you can write more soon, I'm absolutely addicted to this story. AIW:-)

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Postby ilovecheshirecat » Tue Dec 28, 2010 7:18 pm

Why have you stopped writing!! Please keep going!

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Postby Angel-wings » Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:08 am

"Stein I will have your head for this one of these days" the Red Queen yelled as they approached. She sat outside a shabby looking hut that they had obviously made themselves.

"Never again will you be in a position to have my head. I found these troublesome pests wandering in the outlands."

Stein walked past her, with the others following, into the house.

The Queen wasn't far behind.

"You let them live? I think the seclusion has driven you insane you incompotent knave!" She exclaimed as she rounded on him "They should be dead on sight!"

"They made me an offer I couldn't refuse." Stein replied looking at his hand absentmindedly.

"What offer?"

"Tell her" Stein looked at Alice.

"We can stop the headaches. We just need the ring on your finger in return."

"Give my ring? Never!" The Queen cried before noticing Hatter, "What happened to him?"

"That's why we need the ring" Alice sighed.

"I don't think you have anything I want. Yes no headaches would be nice but I've lived with them for this long and I'm used to them by now."

"What scruffy looking dresses!" Hatter had somehow managed to wander without being noticed to a badly made hanger where a row of dresses hung looking very ragged indeed.

"I'll thank you to stay away from my belongings" The Queen huffed "They're mine".

"Why? They don't seem to be worth anything" Stein smirked.

"Oh but some of the material is salvagable" the Hatter examined each garment carefully, "Yes I could make absolutely squiffling outfits from these..."

"You could?" the Red Queen began to look interested despite herself.

"Oh yes. I could make a whole new wardrobe but I would need a little payment...Say a ring?" Hatter looked at the Queen sideways.

The Queen's face screwed up and very reluctantly she took off the ring.

Handing it to the Hatter she stuck out her bottom lip.

"It's not fair you know"

"We'll fix the headaches too" Alice said gently.

"Be grateful or I'll stick ya" Doormouse chimed in.

"Allow me" Chez appeared next to the Queen who jumped high into the air due to shock.

"Ooops...So sorry" Chez grinned

"Well hurry up and get on with it" Stein snapped "I can't stand another minute!"

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Postby aliceaficionado » Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:20 am

Squiffling is a truly great word. :D

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Postby Angel-wings » Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:44 am

Squiffling is a truly great word. :D
It does have a great ring to it

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Postby ~MadderforHatter~ » Sat Feb 12, 2011 3:19 am

Yay, you've updated! And yes, I love the word squiffling, too. ^.^

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Postby Arge » Wed Feb 23, 2011 3:45 pm

It's great please write more!! DIS:-)

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Re: Why me? A Hatter x Alice fic... Updated finally!

Postby Angel-wings » Fri Feb 03, 2017 7:40 am

((Oh guys! I'm so sorry it's been so long!!!!

Does anyone want me to continue?


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