Fan art & fan fiction

ninja-band-aid · Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:14 pm Post subject: Looking for advice and opinions

Eep, I'm always so nervous with my first post on a new website!

I really hope I'm putting this in the right forum...

Alrighty! So, I'm working on a story that follows a modernized Alice in Wonderland. I've been spending the past two months going through Alice Underground and painstakingly re-summerizing the story from a modern perspective.
I'm so close to being finished, and I'm stuck in the middle of the Knave's trial.
If anyone is familiar with the point at which the Duchess's cook is up on the stand, and the king asks "what are tarts made of?" she tells him "pepper, mostly" but then the doormouse corrects her by saying "treacle", I could really use help modernizing it.
To give you some idea of my verson's setting, Alice works in an office, the Duchess is her boss, and the Queen is the CEO. The cook is the Duchess's assistant. They are in the middle of a big meating (rather then a trial) and the queen is trying to figure out who stole money and drugs (called "tea") from her.
I would be very much obliged if anyone can help me.

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Lenny · Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:06 pm Post subject:

Welcome to the forum!
This topic fits best in the 'fan art & fan fiction' subforum, so I moved it for you Wink

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Beautiful Soup · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:31 am Post subject:

Perhaps the 'King' wants to know what the drugs have been cut with...washing powder vs glucose for instance

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