Postby Treacle » Wed Feb 19, 2014 3:20 pm
I see what you're asking.
However, outside the question of 'time' within the writing, there's the process of writing in which the author paces events so the story works. In particular I'm thinking of Alice finally making it into the beautiful garden just in time for the procession and croquet game. That's just part of creating, it seems. Otherwise, if you were writing a story, or shooting a film, you'd have to check with everyone and everything within the as-yet-incomplete story to schedule action. That isn't time-efficient, even if it could work.
That's one consideration among the many.
Within the frame of the story, time is based on Alice's sense of it, on the day of Alice Liddell's birthday, May 4th.